Beef may be what's for dinner, but it could use some proofreading first

[spacealien_vamp]

Found this on the Washington State Beef Commission safety tips page while browsing for information for an icon...

Shop for meat, poultry and seafood last. Place meat packages in plastic bags, to avoid preventing it from touching other foods in the cart.

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[firesign10.livejournal.com]

What information did you need from the Washington State Beef Commission?? *speculates how this could impact icons...*

As a former proofreader.........*shakes head and sighs*

[spacealien-vamp.livejournal.com]

What information did you need from the Washington State Beef Commission?

I wanted to know what the different USDA grades were for different types of beef, so I could use it for rating something.

[firesign10.livejournal.com]

Hmmm, contemplating beefy goodness?? Like some Grade A Ishikawa or USDA Choice Kishitani? heeheehee

[spacealien-vamp.livejournal.com]

Like some Grade A Ishikawa or USDA Choice Kishitani?

Same idea, different fandom. ^_^

I probably should email the maintainer of the site to let them know about it so they can fix it...but on the other hand, I'm vegetarian and philosophically opposed to eating beef, so why would I want to help improve their website? Just on general Web Grammar principles, I suppose...